Comments on: Rate this story please!?

By: miss 2d

miss 2d — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 16:45:59 +0000

wow so far an 8 or 9, is it bad that i expected some really lame story and to rate it a 3 or something. it was surprisingly good and original i mean i read it all the way through unlike most of these type questions. i want to read more! argh you have me hooked!. are you not worried posting this may let people rob this amazing concept you have come up with? but yeah keep writing please you have to finish it. oh and i nearly forgot as a number one fan and critic of your book so far i think i deserve the first copy of this best seller don't you?
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By: troubledwolf

troubledwolf — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 16:23:59 +0000

Ah A Science-Fiction Story.
It Reminds Me Of ‘Afterworld’ from some reason…which is awesome.
I’m not an english proffessor so I can over look trivial grammar mistakes. As Someone who would be the final reader I would definitely like to see more based on what you’ve given us…
hm
lets go with an 8.
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Afterworld is freakin awesome:
http://www.afterworld.tv/

By: Charlotte xoxo

Charlotte xoxo — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 15:42:59 +0000

A massive ten!!! That was amazing, it really kept me in suspense which is what I love and I was only going to read the first paragraph but I was so engrossed I had to read more. All I would say though is a point you have already picked up on and define whether or not the character is a girl or a boy, as I though she was a girl, but aside from that, I thought it was brilliant, I would most certainly read it if it came out.
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By: Meagan H

Meagan H — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 15:09:59 +0000

cool! on a scale from 1 to 10 i give you a 7!
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By: avid reader

avid reader — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 14:38:59 +0000

7.5!
wow that was actually very entertaining. Of course you need to fix the grammatical errors and you might want to revise few of the sentences to get them varied and fluent. Also, I didn’t know the person was a guy until I heard his name. I don’t know whether it’s your writing that gave me the impression of a girl or it’s just me reading too many books in female first persons. You should ask a teacher or an experienced person about that one. But, other than that, good job!

P.S. explain more about the whole weather changing experiments and stuff.
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By: Indi

Indi — Sat, 14 Nov 2009 14:20:59 +0000

What about an 11- YOU'RE A GENIUS =)
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